um rate it?

[Saberstar]

I don't feel like posting this on my other topic, since it had too many post on it already. :p Besides, the first post is already full...

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/kennyl0/Doggy_Girl.JPG

It's a dog girl. >>
Don't just post. <_< Rate and give suggestions on how to improve it.

Hm there are 2 right now since...i redid the drawing. Drew some of the lines darker and make the ass a bit bigger. You might not noice it but it's a tiny tiny bit bigger. >:O Bunch of perverts. I was thinking of cutting her ass off knewing you ppl would complain.
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/kennyl0/doggie_girl.JPG

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dragonic_saber6266/student1.JPG

I don't like the color one. >_> I knew i shouldn't color it. Black and white is sexier. >:O

[Megatokyo]

9.5.....make the butt bigger lol

I would give it a 10 then lol

The left hand sorta looks like it has no wrist, it goes from arm to fingers, so it makes one arm look bigger then the other

[nightsavior]

she looks hot to me! lol. well the shading is great than again you've always been good at that saber. as for her proportions they're a tad off but no more so than some famous anime characters i have seen(by tad off i mean she has large breasts and a small butt...though she looks good in those shorts..mmm mmm!) i'd just make her less top heavy. i'll give it a 9 outta 10...it's well drawn,the shading is superb,and i like the pose the character is in...my only critiques are those that have already been mentioned..also you chose a topic that i favor..hot anime girls! lol.

[Lancet Jades]

Hmm...9.5 out of 10, definitely.

I really don't know what advice to give....although i agree with nighty that the left hand looks like it dont have a wrist...

And, slippie is right...make the butt a bit bigger...

[Chaos Theory]

lol that is so cool Kenny

the only thing I would change is the wirst

I still give it a 10 though


Draw a cat girl next :D

[Lancet Jades]

lol that is so cool Kenny


the only thing I would change is the wirst

I still give it a 10 though


Draw a cat girl next :D
yes!! cat girl!!!!!

[Saberstar]

Perverts >_> Next thing we know you'll want her boobs 2 times bigger.
I re-did her ass. So now you people can compare from those 2 drawings...So is her ass still a pic too small? If it is i have to redo like...her waist etc to her legs. :\
As for the hands, i tried redoing it, it still looks a bit the same but it's not and um i hate drawing hands.

[Chaos Theory]

lol no her breast are nice


I dont like to big anyways

nice shading by the way

[Lancet Jades]

yes, i like it too.

boobs = good size, IMO

[Saberstar]

I like her ears and hair. But her tail is meh. >_< I had to do the lower parts from my memory. Since they took her pic out today.Almost 500 post. ^_^
And i don't think i'll do a cat girl. :pOh and notice her eyes are very sexy. Especially the right one. O_O

[Lancet Jades]

i like her tail...

[Leknaat]

I used to have a dog that had a tail like that.^_^ I guess it's my fault the other post was full...I like the revision you did to the butt. You did that from memory? Damn it turned out good. I'll give it a 9.8!!!!!!!

[Chaos Theory]

lol I love the wink :D

[nightsavior]

like i said i think it's good...and it's refreshing to see you gave her different animal traits..most of the time anime artists have a fetish for drawing nothing but cat girls..it's nice to have some variety now and again..

[Chaos Theory]

lol Bunny girl :D

[Saberstar]

I used to have a dog that had a tail like that.^_^ I guess it's my fault the other post was full...I like the revision you did to the butt. You did that from memory? Damn it turned out good. I'll give it a 9.8!!!!!!!

I did a light sketch, not that great. But it gives me an idea about the size, etc.

And if you want to see Bunny girls go to a strip bar or something. <<

[Lancet Jades]

lol, good one saber >_>

but serriously, you rock as an artist. and i mean r0x0rz

[Laggy]

nice job man. i give it a 9.99 lolol

[nightsavior]

despite my small critiques i liked the pic saber. frankly if i was you i wouldn't change it too much..it's just last time i commented on someones art without critiquing it and only complimented it they mentioned it to me. so i thought i'd try putting in some constructive criticism..but to be honest saber i sometimes see more flaws in famous manga and anime cartoons than i see in the art of non famous independent artists. you can definetly get your art published if you keep at it! you do some great drawings that is for sure..

[Zelphiel]

her shoulders are a bit wide and her ass could be a little bigger.... other than that... nice work.

[Saberstar]

her shoulders are a bit wide and her ass could be a little bigger.... other than that... nice work.

I think her shoulder is okay..I mean she isn't exactly whom i called a skinny girl. if I make it somewhat smaller, it might not suit her boob.

As for the ass being small. It's probably because she's wearing really tight shorts. :D
*Warns Lathan for not rating it* :p

Oh yea i don't like to get my stuff published. I just do it when i'm bored and show them to people, etc. I would get it plublished, if i were better at it.

Oh and i was going to reply to your other post Leknaat.I guess I forgot. But the other topics being full, it's not your fault. It's well out fault. :D

[Leknaat]

LOL we yeah we did filll it up.

I had a drawing published in my school magazine when I was 15 and I found it the other day and looked at the drawing and was like...whoa I've improved....Oh I don't think I said this in my other post but I like the way you draw hair.

[Tiffany]

good job man..i give ya a 9.5 too

[ChibiArisu]

I like it alot! ^^, I mean, so what if Ima a girl >_> <_<. I have one comment. The head is a LITTLE too small. Everything else is great ^_^, just pointin that out. Overall......9.8! =)

[suzuka249]

I think that her waist underneath her breasts comes out a bit, and maybe you should do a bit of shading under her left buttox to give more definition to the butt, but (hehehe, they sound similar) besides that, it is good

scratch that, do shading under each buttox, I beleive that could help it. and also, wrists go like
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that is just how I think it could be helped, but besides......... man, there are a lot of buts in this thread.... anyways, back to the topic... I give it a 9, very good

[Saberstar]

I did another sketch but this time with color. >_<
Oh yeah it's not finished. I think i need to change the eye, that is if i can erase it...